Reply To: Jenn Fox Submissions Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Jenn Fox Submissions › Reply To: Jenn Fox Submissions August 28, 2019 at 1:48 pm #33495 Lisa CoughlinParticipant Jenn, Here’s my take on the next section. There’s very little suggestions. It’s clean and well said as far as I’m concerned. As always, take what helps and dispose of the rest. Lisa C. Attachments:You must be logged in to access attached files.