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Ana Morgan
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Super chapter, Carla. Funny, fast-paced, great introductions of the main characters.

I do craft shows (not bridal) as part of my day job, and you nailed the scene at the Expo.

I followed your list of things to note. Feel free to disagree!

Ana

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