Reply To: Lisa Kerr submissions Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Lisa Kerr submissions › Reply To: Lisa Kerr submissions August 30, 2019 at 1:23 pm #33549 Lisa CoughlinParticipant Interesting how she has a one-night stand with one man but ends up in another’s bed. I’m curious to see where this leads. Just some grammatical suggestions for you to consider. Good work. Lisa C Attachments:You must be logged in to access attached files.