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Ana Morgan
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Great chapter. I “get” how Leslie feels about Brock—and like how you show his hurt feelings when they walk for coffee.  The barf scene is hilarious and terrible in how Melanie blames the cake. And Brock shows he’s a real gentleman!

Ana

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