Reply To: Lisa Coughlin Chapter 2 Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Lisa Coughlin Chapter 2 › Reply To: Lisa Coughlin Chapter 2 September 7, 2019 at 3:24 pm #33668 Carla WardParticipant Hi Lisa, I love the story so far. I’m a huge Christmas Carol fan, so I’m thoroughly enjoying your retelling. I marked a few places with ideas or comments. Take and leave what you like. Great work!! Carla Attachments:You must be logged in to access attached files.