Reply To: Lisa Coughlin Chapter 2

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Carla Ward
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Hi Lisa,

I love the story so far. I’m a huge Christmas Carol fan, so I’m thoroughly enjoying your retelling.

I marked a few places with ideas or comments. Take and leave what you like.

Great work!!

Carla

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