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Ana Morgan
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This is Plot Point 2 for the story—when the heroine decides to fight back. It’s also the black moment in the love story. Hopefully it’s not too much in one chapter.

Please let me know if I 1. repeated words and could have found better alternates. 2. used too many physical action tags. 3. missed places for deep POV.

TIA, Ana

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