Reply To: Zara West Submissions Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Zara West Submissions › Reply To: Zara West Submissions September 14, 2019 at 6:23 pm #34166 Jennette FoxParticipant Rough draft? I’m impressed. This is magnificent, Zara. I’d definitely read on. My comments and suggestions are attached. Jenn Attachments:You must be logged in to access attached files.