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Lisa Coughlin
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Ana & Jenn,

Thanks again for your input. I’m happier with the chapter. Oh, and Ana, I appreciate the mini-lesson. I’m horrible with effect and cause rather than cause and effect.

 

Tootles,

Lisa

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