Reply To: Jenn Fox Submissions Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Jenn Fox Submissions › Reply To: Jenn Fox Submissions September 16, 2019 at 12:41 pm #34297 Lisa CoughlinParticipant Here you go, Jenn. Only one real concern. I highlighted it and made some suggestions. Other than that, keep up the great work. Tootles Lisa C. Attachments:You must be logged in to access attached files.