Reply To: Zara West Submissions Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Zara West Submissions › Reply To: Zara West Submissions September 22, 2019 at 3:20 pm #34620 Zara WestParticipant Hi everyone, Here is my next chapter. This is the REAL Ch 17. The chapter I submitted last week was actually Chapter 16. All comments welcome. Zara Attachments:You must be logged in to access attached files.