Reply To: Carla Ward submissions Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Carla Ward submissions › Reply To: Carla Ward submissions September 28, 2019 at 1:01 pm #34883 Lisa CoughlinParticipant You’ve got a great sense of humor. I love this! Just a few suggestions, mostly punctuation. Keep up the great work. Lisa C. Attachments:You must be logged in to access attached files.