Reply To: Carla Ward submissions Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Carla Ward submissions › Reply To: Carla Ward submissions October 2, 2019 at 11:48 am #35064 Carla WardParticipant Chapter 4. FYI – my goal is to finish editing my manuscript by January. So please suggest ways to tighten, clarify, or strengthen the work. I appreciate you help. Carla Attachments:You must be logged in to access attached files.