Reply To: Lisa Coughlin Chapter 5&6

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Carla Ward
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Hi Lisa,

Great chapters! I like the tension you’re building between Mick and Patti. The flashback scene was great! Here are a few suggestions. Use what you find useful.

 

Carla

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