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Carla Ward
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Hi Ladies,

Here’s chapter 5.

Quick recap of chapter 4….

  • Leslie discovered she’d missed the last premium payment for her liability insurance. Her policy has lapsed as a result, and she has to call customer service to get it reinstated. It costs extra to do that, and since the check she was expecting (from Mrs. Crumbsfield) doesn’t come, she’s in the red.
  • Brock gets a call from Phoodie TV. He’s been chosen to compete on the show Elite Cake Artist. Trouble is, the woman he’d put on his application as his partner is no longer available. So now he’s desperate to track down Leslie to ask her.

 

As always, help me find places to clarify, tighten, and strengthen.

 

Thanks!

Carla

  • This reply was modified 1 year ago by Carla Ward. Reason: ch 5 Carla
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