Reply To: Carla Ward submissions Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Carla Ward submissions › Reply To: Carla Ward submissions October 9, 2019 at 5:00 pm #35172 Lisa CoughlinParticipant Carla, Here’s chapter 5. I’ve got to go to work and will get to chapter 6 later. Nothing major–mostly comma’s. I love to hate Cheryl. Tootles Lisa C. Attachments:You must be logged in to access attached files.