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Ana Morgan
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Here is ch 24. Ammi has defied Franco and asserted her right to have Boy Martin and be with her Father. She rushing to get ready to care for baby….

TIA for all help. Action clear? Places were more Deep POV would help? Repeated words?

Ana

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