Reply To: Lisa Coughlin Chapter 7

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Carla Ward
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Hi Lisa,

I think this works really well. I can see his growth and as well as the potential this trio has for happiness. I marked a few nit picky things. Use whatever’s helpful. You’re story is blossoming beautifully.

 

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