Reply To: Zara West Submissions Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Zara West Submissions › Reply To: Zara West Submissions November 5, 2019 at 3:03 pm #35806 Zara WestParticipant Thank you Carla, Jenn, and Ana for your feedback on my Chapter 20. Always vital for making the story better. Here is my chapter 21. Only 2 more to go in this book. Zara Attachments:You must be logged in to access attached files.