Reply To: Zara West Submissions Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Zara West Submissions › Reply To: Zara West Submissions November 5, 2019 at 4:01 pm #35811 Jennette FoxParticipant Great job, Zara. I look forward to reading the end and seeing how it all comes together. My suggestions are small. Use whichever ones resonate and ignore the rest. Attachments:You must be logged in to access attached files.