Reply To: Zara West Submissions Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Zara West Submissions › Reply To: Zara West Submissions November 6, 2019 at 9:36 pm #35852 Carla WardParticipant Well done. I only found a few minor things. Take what you find useful. I love the whole trying to send a message in a bottle thing with the girl. Good stuff! Carla Attachments:You must be logged in to access attached files.