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Carla Ward
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Here’s chapter 11. I struggled with this one. There’s a lot of description of space and physical items and I have a difficult time with that. If you see ways to improve/tighten/smooth etc please point them out.

TIA. I appreciate this group so much. With your help I hope to be finished with this ms by Feb and begin the querying process.

Thanks!
Carla

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