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Carla Ward
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Great comments Zara, thank you. I get nervous when it comes to writing the parts where they actually sculpt cake. I used to make these sort of cakes, and think it’s a little harder to write about because I’m so familiar with it. I have to pretend I’m not familiar and related everything in a way others can understand. And of course, I want to preserve the way cake artists phrase things, so it’s a tough line to walk.

I appreciate everything you pointed out like adding action and deepening POV. Really great stuff. Thanks!

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