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Carla Ward
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Here’s chapter 13.

One of Ana’s previous comments made me realize that I hadn’t successfully conveyed the size of the figures they are carving out of cake. So I went back to the chapter where they talk about the theme of the competition and added a few lines about the height requirement. The entire piece must be at least four feet tall.

I just wanted to mention that alteration so that everything makes sense from here on out and you can help me better illustrate what I’ve envisioned.

As always, help me smooth, clarify, and accurately describe.

Thanks in advance.

Carla

 

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