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Jen Melland
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Okay, so I personally kinda like when in Liv’s POV we alternate between Liv and Olivia, but everyone else seems kind of stuck on it. Later on when the hero is introduced, he only calls (and thinks of her) as Olivia (we’ll find out later why). Should I stick with Liv in her own POV and Olivia in the heroes? What does everyone think?

Thanks!

Jen

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