One of the books I read/listened to on editing was Cathy Yardley’s Rock Your Revisions. It’s on Amazon. The book is $2.99 and the audio is $1.99, so even if it helps a little, I think it’s worth it. 🙂 And no, I don’t know Cathy personally. I just admire her work.
I have a question. I have no clue on how to start editing my own work. I’m not sure where to begin what to look for or anything. I know I am awful at having anything other than action and dialogue. But what else would be something to look at?