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Carla Ward
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Here’s ch. 18.

In the last chapter, Brock mentioned taking another crack at getting Melanie to confess to fraud on tape. Here’s their second attempt. As always, I’d appreciate suggestions that help me clarify, tighten, and describe.

Thanks!

Carla

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