The copy’s really clean. I didn’t find anything that I thought needed touching up. I like the intrigue surrounding the campaign. Is this a romantic suspense or just a contemporary romance?
I guess I will throw one thing out there. I’m assuming there will be a clean “break” between Milly and Tim before she and Mark get involved? There are rules in romance about no cheating, so I thought I’d mention it. You’re probably already aware of that though.
Great chapter. Can’t wait to see where it goes from here.