Reply To: Todd McGee submissions Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Todd McGee submissions › Reply To: Todd McGee submissions January 16, 2020 at 5:35 pm #40083 Todd McGeeParticipant Here’s chapter 4. Struggled with the sequence in this one. Let me know if I went overboard in back story. Trying to fill in some blanks without the dreaded info dump is hard. Attachments:You must be logged in to access attached files.