It is really fascinating to read about brain science and how it can help with writing. Honestly I had never considered utilizing brain science with my writing . However, when I went back and looked at some of my past work for the “good stuff”, or what I considered the “good stuff”, I was subconsciously doing it. The “bad stuff” was much more wordy and less driven by human emotion.
Bingo! As always, “follow no rule off a cliff,” but do learn to analyze your pages through the lens of conflict/tension. (Keeping in mind those things are like spice: too much and your words are inedible…)
//Interstellar Adventure Infused with Romance//