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Zara West

Hi Vicki

Here are my thoughts on Ch 21. I really struggled with Elise’s feelings and actions and likability, and I don’t know if I was successful in expressing why and providing ways to improve her character. If you have questions or want some of my character arc worksheets let me know. At any rate, use what you feel best helps your story. Zara


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