Thanks so much for your feedback. I haven’t gone through all of it yet, but I’ve saved everything and hope to look at it in the next few days. I love that you are enjoying the story and appreciate that you’ve given me so much to think about.
I’m sorry about the confusion with my chapters. I’d originally had one Eric POV and one Elise POV per chapter, but went through and adjusted to make the chapters scene based. The three submissions you haven’t read were: Lethal Lies June 11, Lethal Lies June 18, Lethal Lies Chapter 21. I should have probably stuck with the original numbering for the sake of consistency. Let me know if you’d like it as one file. I think all together, it’s about 7,000 words.