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Zara West
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Hi Ana,

 

Thank you for those great catches.

No. Going home to mother is not a good idea. Did you find the explicit sex discussion interesting enough to carry the scene? I really struggled with how to show how uninformed middle class women of the time were about sex and how far out Ida was in her sexual reform campaign at the time. Not to mention fit in an angel lover.

 

Zara

 

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