Reply To: Vicki Briner Submissions Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Vicki Briner Submissions › Reply To: Vicki Briner Submissions July 17, 2020 at 3:35 pm #42608 Ana MorganParticipant Ooh, the pacing is terrific, Vicki. Short, choppy sentences. Quick reactions. More questions than answers. To be caught between two crime families. Youch! Ana Attachments:You must be logged in to access attached files.