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Brenda Nelson-Davis
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Hi Rachel,

I love your beginning pages.  Debt has forced Edward James Douglas Winter, Earl of Delbar to marry a beautiful stranger. (How scary to marry someone you don’t know at all.) He’s determined not to fall for a pretty face/ and go into further debt like his father did, but when the carriage hits a rough patch, he gallantly catches his wife and feels attraction—the push and pull of romance starts, and I’m in. She’s civil but cold. I’m guessing he’ll warm to his wife (and she to him) as he gets to know her, but I’m hoping for sparks. I’d read this because I’m sure the journey will be enchanting. Great work. And let me, when you finish this ‘cuz, I’d love to read it.

Brenda

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