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Vicki Briner
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Good chapter. Lots of rich description. I lean toward fewer words, especially in dialogue, but ignore me if any of my cuts don’t feel right.

And thanks so much for your comments on my June 18 submission. I don’t think anyone has ever compared my writing to someone else. That was super nice.

Vicki

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