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ellen.gilman
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Kendra,

You had me fully engaged(hook) with the ferret. I had no idea what to expect when I started reading. This is my very first foray into Fantasy or Urban Fantasy, but you brought me right into the story. ¬†Sometimes when you read a new genre it is confusing to understand….not here.I felt like I was sitting beside your character and watching her interactions with all her stuffies. (emotion shown is so raw and real) She seems to be conflicted and worried about what is going to happen to her.

Inciting incident/ trip to cat sanctuary.  what changes will be coming once they get there?

Set-up /trigger…appearance of a magical ferret.

 

 

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