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ellen.gilman
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Wow! Lots of hooks…..when Ammi asked about gene markers, when she wondered if she could ┬ásave her dad? Would her mom’s body ever be found?

trigger, set-up Ammi is obviously petrified that she has the gene marker for schizophrenia.

Emotions…you had me on a roller coaster up and down I went. loved the suspense you built up.

For me, everything about this opening was perfect. I definitely would love to read more.

 

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