Reply To: Vicki Briner Submissions Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Vicki Briner Submissions › Reply To: Vicki Briner Submissions July 20, 2020 at 9:19 pm #42718 Zara WestParticipant Hi Vicki, Tremendous rewrite. Everything flows so much better. Zara Attachments:You must be logged in to access attached files.