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kathy.strobos
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I loved this opening. I already liked/felt empathy for the protagonist just from the line “my whole life is boxes” which made me think that she moved a lot and was living with a not-totally-together aunt (dirty clothes, dirty dishes).  Then of course you added the ferret and her magical powers and I was hooked by her conflict not to be drawn into conversation with the ferret. And then you ended with another twist/hook that there was no sky (as previously commented).

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