I appreciate your kind critique. Thanks for pointing out what you needed to know as a reader. Am I right in assuming we should rewrite and resubmit for the next lesson?
Absolutely, if you can get a rewrite done in the next few days, submit it to the class as we’re going to continue the two final lessons using students’ submissions as our “workshop” samples. Please do NOTE at the top of your post that this is a REWRITE so students don’t use the wrong post for upcoming homework comments.
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