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HiDee Ekstrom
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Brenda,

I had some of the same concerns as Linnea on the first version. I definitely thought she’d been caught shop-lifting, and I didn’t realize she was working when she was in the gift shop. I think you handled the rewrite really well. I’m definitely wondering what Charlene is going to do next!

Nice job!

HiDee Ekstrom

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