July 22, 2020 at 9:11 pm #42792
Lesson Four Homework – I’m running behind
- ANALYZE: Can you spot the Inciting Incident – he’s an FBI agent
- , the Trigger Set Up – death of his father and his flourishment in the FBI… The drip of the faucet indicating his nervousness
- , and/or the Hook? Can you spot the fire—or the first flickering of a possible fire—that the MC won’t be able to put out? The instant tension between himself and the female pilot.
I would so love to read the rest of this story…
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