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Pepper North
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Lesson Four Homework  –  I’m running behind

  1. ANALYZE:  Can you spot the Inciting Incident – he’s an FBI agent
  2. , the Trigger Set Up – death of his father and his flourishment in the FBI… The drip of the faucet indicating his nervousness
  3. , and/or the Hook? Can you spot the fire—or the first flickering of a possible fire—that the MC won’t be able to put out?  The instant tension between himself and the female pilot.

I would so love to read the rest of this story…

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