Pepper, thanks so much for your analysis and comment about the flower arranging. That was the major change from the first draft due to (sorry I forgot who brought it up besides Linnea) another inmate’s comment that I needed to let my reader know whether Daisy knew how to arrange flowers. Plus I employed another tool….I realized it would be so much better to “show not “tell” that Daisy knew flower arranging. I had lots of fun writing that part so it was particularly rewarding that you liked that piece. As to your comment about Daisy and Edward being stuck in a small town that got me thinking….ummmm…might want to use that somehow.Thanks so much!!