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ellen.gilman
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Pepper, thanks so much for your analysis and comment about the flower arranging. That was the major change from the first draft due to (sorry I forgot who brought it up besides Linnea) another inmate’s comment that I needed to let my reader know whether Daisy knew how to arrange flowers. Plus I employed another tool….I realized it would be so much better to  “show not “tell” that Daisy knew flower arranging.  I had lots of fun writing that part so it was particularly rewarding that you liked that piece. As to your comment about Daisy and Edward being stuck in a small town that got me thinking….ummmm…might want to use that somehow.Thanks so much!!

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