Kendra. Thanks for the comments. Everyone’s comments have helped me get it to where I like the opening myself. Seems to always work like this for me. I definitely need feedback and suggestions and ten re-writes to get where it seems right.
As to the conversation with her dad I have a question. I am not sure if it should go well or not. I don’t want to paint her dad as a really bad person just one who is job driven so he reacts badly.Any thoughts? Right now I’m thinking her dad might come to Houndsville to help Daisy out after the murder when her mom is one of the suspects. It might be that Daisy is one of the suspects too..not sure yet.