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Linnea Sinclair
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I agree about benefitting from feedback, Ellen. To tighten v3 even further, you could eliminate some dialogue tags in the beginning. Ana

Bingo, Ana, well done.

I always find it’s easier to edit someone else’s work rather than my own, don’t you all? My brain/eyes either put in things that aren’t there (and should be) or gloss over things I’ve done incorrectly. Arrgh. 🙂

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