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Vicki Briner
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Thank you Ana, Lisa and Zara for reading my rewrite. Your edits and suggestions continue to strengthen my work.

Here is the next chapter. I have mixed feelings about this one. This scene has been through multiple iterations and has caused a great deal consternation. I’ll be curious to see your thoughts, as I’m having a hard time separating craft from general frustration.

Thanks!

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