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kendra.frost
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Kendra, your comment made my day because I was trying to show Rory as a good guy. And so I am so happy that worked.

Yeah that /definitely/ came through, and right when he appeared on the page.

it’s dangerous to love someone/better to be less emotionally involved.

I can see how that misbelief could tie into this current situation, but it didn’t really show. … Maybe you could highlight it when you mention the best friend’s comments and “switching lanes.” That could be a good spot for MC to say, not only that she doesn’t want to switch lanes, but that she’s seen where that goes and it’s better to be cool/calm/not-invested-romantically.

Author of Renn and The Springfield Chronicles
https://www.wattpad.com/user/KendraMFrost

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