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Vicki Briner
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Zara,

It’s a good suggestion and actually helps with the chapter I had following the plane. I guess my thought was that if everyone thinks the bit on the plane is unbelievable, why would they believe that he’s roaming around a gangster’s house? Ergo, major rewrites. I’ll have to mull it over. I tend to let things roll around my head for a while before writing. It’s one of the reasons I work so slowly.

Vicki

  • This reply was modified 1 month, 3 weeks ago by Vicki Briner.
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