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Zara West
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Hi Vicki,

I think Eric wandering around the compound can work if her Papi is trying to prove that Elsie is free and not his prisoner, and she asks him to do so. Put up the chapter you have as written. We’ll let you know – as always. 😉

 

Zara

 

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