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Jessica Jayne
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Hi Vicki, I’ve had complete overhauls of some chapters too. I do believe Zara provided me feedback on Haven very early on regarding my opening chapters. I completely changed the opening – it took me some time – but I think it worked better for the story. I am also a slower writer so I feel your pain. I think Zara’s suggestion works and would not require a complete overhaul. However, that is me saying this without having read the next chapters. Sit on it for a few days. Sometimes that helps me. 🙂

Jessica Jayne
Sexy Stories with Heart
FTHRW Secretary

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